A Story on the Way

At last, I have finished the first draft of "Mutant of Mainstream." I'm very excited about that story. In fact, I think I like it better than any first draft of a story I have ever written. There is a lot of passion in it, a lot of personality, a lot of feeling. But I am really going to need feedback on this one since I am writing it from the perspective of a deaf guy and I am neither a guy nor am I deaf. The story is split up into four chapters, so I may post one chapter at a time as I complete them. The first draft isn't terribly long--about twenty-six handwritten pages--and I imagine that the second draft will be about the same length. I would like to have as many readers as possible. Thank you, everyone.